A very decent piece of work!!!
This was decent. The art and animation was not the reason why I stuck through for the whole animation it was the calm and decent story. There was absence of violence or nudity and it was just great to see that. This was just perfect. Keep doing what you do best write great stories and ideas and all else will follow. You already know your weakness, so I need not tell you where to improve in. Hope to see some more work from you and don't forget keep those ideas flowing. Art is important but without a good story or joke, it just plain art. It's like watching a music video without sound that makes no darn sense. Either way this was great keep it up. I am going to take a peek at your other stuff, they better be just as cool as this. :)